雅思大作文7分范文及解析：好的教育比个人能力更重要

观点类大作文，教育类话题

Good teaching is more important for academic success than individual ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目来源：2022年7月7日大陆雅思大作文

题目大意

对学业成功来说，良好的教学比个人能力更重要。你在多大程度上同意或不同意？

思路解析

这是一道观点类大作文，聊的是教学与个人能力对比的问题。题目不长，但是审题要点很多。一是限定对象“academic success”，这道题只讨论对学术成功的作用，不考虑别的比如工作和生活。二是题目包含了比较关系，即“good teaching”比“individual ability”更重要，在论证过程中要围绕着是否“more important”展开，而非单纯重不重要。三是“good teaching”和“individual ability”分别指什么很多同学不明白，前者指的是好的教育理念、教育方法、教学能力等，简单举个例子，像一道数学题是不是能把讲的简单易懂；后者则指的是个人天赋、理解能力、学习能力等等，比如有的人就是能很快理解公式并运用。明白了这些要素，下面我们一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看个人能力的重要性，有两方面可以体现。

一是有些人确实会能力更突出，比如对于数字有极高的敏感度、抽象思维能力等等，这些天赋和能力能够有助于他们在相关领域比其他人更具有优势，而且是普通人难以通过后期培养能获得的。

二是有些人学习能力更强，这使得他他们在相同教育环境下，能比其他人更快的掌握更加丰富的知识内容。

然后来看好的教育的重要性，也可以从三方面体现。

一是学生在学习提升的过程中需要老师教授已有的知识，知识本身是不会突然出现在脑海中的，而是需要通过学习来掌握，即使能力强的学生也会需要。并且好老师能将知识讲的浅显易懂，帮助学生更快吸收。

二是有学生在一开始并不一定清楚自己哪个学术领域更具有天赋和能力，而好的教育能够帮助学生开发兴趣爱好、寻找自己擅长的领域，并鼓励其进行更加深入的研究和探索。

三是一个人即使有天赋，外部环境的好坏对于其学习依然有很大的影响。糟糕的教育环境很可能会使得一个人不认真学习甚至厌恶学习，导致其天赋能力被白白浪费。

提纲

高分范文示例

It is universally acknowledged that among all the contributing factors to academic success, good teaching is oftentimes considered more essential than personal ability. From my perspective, given that innate potential can hardly be changed, good teaching is a more prominent determiner of one’s academic excellence.

It may be argued that individual ability determines to what extent one can achieve. Since everyone is born with different levels of innate talent, some students may find it easier to concentrate on academic study and comprehend abstract conceptions and ideas, while others who lack the requisite natural ability and interest in academic study can hardly achieve excellence. Therefore, even in the same educational setting, only those who possess the abilities necessary for learning and researching would achieve the desired success.

However, good teaching tends to bring out the best in a person regardless of his or her abilities. On the one hand, schools and teachers play a pivotal role in discovering an individual’s talent and strength. Without a qualified instructor who is competent in simplifying the concepts and elaborating them for students, it would be difficult, or even to the point of impossibility, for any learner to comprehend the learning materials by themselves, no matter how talented they are. Moreover, school attendants are doomed to benefit a lot from a skilled teacher’s cultivation of an ever-lasting curiosity and interest in academic study. On the other hand, a student’s gift of genius would be regretfully wasted if one’s family fails to provide a positive learning environment where the surroundings including family environment, friends and relatives tend to have a huge impact on one’s attitude towards learning.

In conclusion, though individual ability cannot be underestimated in academic study, I still believe that good teaching has the power to change one’s destiny and lead to academic success.

相关词汇和语法结构

innate potential  先天潜能

bring out the best  显露最好的一面

qualified  有资历的

underestimate  低估