咱们来看看3月18日的雅思大作文回顾&分析:
3月18日雅思大作文题
Many cities replace farmlands and parks with houses. Is it positive or negative?
题目解析:
这是一篇城市发展类的文章, 属于观点不难想, 但是想得高分还得看文笔的题目。
我这篇采用的是5段式结构, 着重注意单词的替换和地道的表达~
老话长谈,想要雅思考试大作文拿满分,不仅要结构清晰,论证有力,高级、地道、专业的表达也非常重要。
不同话题有不同的适用高分词组和短语,只有做到准确表达你的观点和想法,才能让你的文章脱颖而出。
莫着急,大神这次也给大家整理了适用于此次Urban Development Issues作文话题的高分词组和短语,赶紧记起来吧~
3月18日范文高分词组短语
Integral parts 不可或缺的部分
Urban landscapes 城市景观
City planner 市政规划员
Ever-increasing urban population
日益增长的城市人口
Dining tables 餐桌
Cold-chain technology 冷链技术
Food transportation 食物运输
Close contact with nature
亲近大自然
City dweller/urban resident/city folks
城市居民
Plant photosynthesis 植物的光合作用
Living expenses 生活成本
Supply and demand mechanism
供求关系
Deflate the property bubble
抑制房价
Career prospects 职业前景
Human capital 人力资本
Hang out with friends
和朋友出去浪
想要取得更高的写作分数,仅仅是以上提到的内容还是不够的,语法多样性及准确性(grammar range and accuracy)这一项也不容忽视。那么问题来了,究竟什么样的语法句式会给你的写作加分呢?
大神在这里给大家分享了独家范文中涉及到的8大高分语法句型:
3月18日范文高分长句语法
1.Now, they are supplanted by more houses as city planners attempt to accommodate the ever-increasing urban population. 原因状语从句
2.Undeniably, relocating farmlands to the countryside means that it now takes longer to transport fresh food from farms to people’s dining tables, but the cold-chain technology widely used in food transportation is mature and effective enough to keep food from spoiling. 宾语从句, 分词做定语
3.I argue that they fret less about the inability to be close the nature than about their rising living expenses. 比较状语从句
4.Basic supply and demand mechanism indicates that when supply of a good goes up, its price usually goes the opposite direction. 宾语从句
5.Thus, more houses help to deflate the property bubble, lowering mortgage payment for homeowners and rent for tenants. 结果状语
6.And when food is produced in villages, where land price is significantly cheaper that it is in cities, urban households’ food bills would fall and they would have more wherewithal to spare on other aspects, such as education and entertainment. 定语从句
7.Ambitious people would use the time saved to lean new knowledge and acquire new skills, which not only enhances their career prospects but also boosts the human capital of the city as a whole. 非限定定语从句
8.Less ambitious urban residents can spend more time to hang out with friends and accompany their family members, which is conducive to maintaining their mental health. 非限定定语从句
只要吃透大神的这篇作文精华分享,还愁雅思作文分数没法提高嘛!