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Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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极限运动存在一定的风险,但是禁止极限运动并不可取。这项运动本身有一定好处,能够让人们挑战极限、释放压力、克服恐惧、建立信心,这也是极限运动受到欢迎的原因。禁止人们从事极限运动必然遭到很多人反对,因为侵犯了人们做选择的自由和权利。对于极限运动,比较合理的做法是做好风险防范和保护措施,而不是完全禁止此类活动。

参考范文

Some activities, such as skydiving and skiing, are classified as “dangerous sports” because of their potential risks. While some people suggest these sports should be banned, I hold a different view on this issue. Firstly, banning extreme sports is unreasonable as engaging in these sports provides an effective way for people to alleviate stress, conquer fears and boost self-confidence. As participants take on challenging tasks, they shift their attention away from daily routines towards these stimulating activities. The risks associated with extreme sports stimulate the release of various chemicals in the body that make them excited. When individuals realize they have conquered their inner fears, they develop a strong sense of confidence. Also, prohibiting dangerous sports infringes on people’s freedom to pursue activities they enjoy. Many adults who engage in extreme sports are well aware of the risks involved, and they can make informed decisions about whether to participate or not. Denying them this choice contradicts the principles of personal freedom and responsibility. It's important to respect individuals' autonomy in deciding to take part in these activities, as they have the capacity to weigh the risks and benefits for themselves. The main opposition to extreme sports is the concern that these activities pose a threat to participants’ safety. In the event of an accident, players may suffer serious injuries or even lose their lives. While this concern has merit, it does not mean we should ban extreme sports. What we need is to implement proper safety measures and regulations to protect participants’ safety. To summarize, instead of imposing an outright ban, we should strike a balance between keeping people safe and allowing them to enjoy the benefits of extreme sports.

重点词汇/语料

classify 分类

potential 潜在的

unreasonable 不合理的

engage in 从事

alleviate 缓解

conquer 战胜

shift 转移

stimulate 刺激

release 释放

generate 产生

prohibit 禁止

infringe on 侵犯

contradict 违背

principle 原则

autonomy 自主

weigh 权衡

pose a threat 造成威胁

in the event of 万一

implement 实施

impose 强制实行

outright 完全的

strike a balance 取得平衡

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