【真题示范】雅思写作逻辑链—高分必备（下）

上期我们跟着机构老师写作真题示范，教你如何正反态度“两手抓”！让雅思作文看起来更有逻辑更有针对性，面对一个话题时如何表达两种对立态度更加流畅合理！破解了逻辑链后，本期我们一起看看如何将句子更丝滑地串联在一起成为一篇高质量的文章~

学会用逻辑链把一篇作文的所有观点以及观点的论证都串起来了，接下来一起看看在理顺逻辑之后，如何将各个句子更好地连接起来吧！

Admittedly, technological development has positive influences on society. Firstly, it has freed people from tedious and onerous labor work, which is attributed to the mechanization of industry and agriculture. For example, in modern car factories, robots have substituted for human workers to do tasks such as welding car bodies and screwing bolts. Secondly, technological advances in many fields, including medicine, transportation, and telecommunication, have also provided people with a more enjoyable life and are of vital significance to a country’s progress. It is undoubtful that the criteria viewing whether a country is strong or not, except for economy, is technology. Take America, a country that became one of the most powerful nations because of the Technological Revolution.

句子解析

which is attributed to：是一个非限定从，要表达因为什么/归因于什么，可以用be attributed to科技发展我们在这段第一句就已经用过了，所以不妨可以用表达technological advances 科技进步。

including：放在文中其实也可以表达such as，虽然他们的中文意思不同，但也算是一种同义替代噢。

be of significance= be significant 同样地，当我们要表达be important时，也可以用be of importance

country’s progress：想要去避免development的重复使用，但又想表达“国家发展”，也不妨可以用上相近意思的country’s progress国家进程

take sth：take sth的用法可以表达为“以…为例”是一个很好的去替代“for example”的表达

However, technology has caused problems in people’s careers and daily lives. For one thing, it sets a barrier for people to get employed since workers should be more qualified to meet the requirements for employment. In the past, for instance, literate candidates might be hired as clerks or receptionists, whereas now these positions may require computer skills. For another thing, new forms of crimes, like online fraud, privacy intrusion, and copyright infringement, have been bred. There is still a consideration, which is that if immature technology is applied in real life, it will trigger tragedies, whether it be accidents or disasters. After all, numerous news reports of low-quality batteries causing explosions and even fires, when charged, have seen such an opinion be proven.

句子解析

for one thing … for another thing：可以去避免重复使用firstly / secondly，以及如果还有观点的话，也可以用上there is still a consideration, which is that …或者another consideration in the case is that ….

trigger：这个单词本来是指枪的扳机，用作动词的时候可以表达“引起”“导致”，去替代cause，当然cause的同义替代还有很多，比如give rise to 或者render等。

whether A or B ：一种虚拟语气，表示“无论是A还是B”

以上举例的句式结构、用语等都可以记下来替换在自己的文章中，丰富自己的语言表达~