1、对理科强校的“偏见”也许很多人会认为,麻省理工学院这样以理科闻名于世的学校,在申请的时候可能会更注重学生理工类的专科成绩,而不是写作这样的文科类别。
在最近与小萨老师制作文书指南的时候,我也带着同样的“偏见”,打开了麻省理工学院的招生界面,多元化的文书要求,让我大开眼界。
2、MIT 的“文科基因”MIT 的招生官认为,与其让申请者用一篇长长的文书介绍自己,我们不如多设计几个问题让申请者去回答,这样才能让我们更好地了解你。典型的理科生思维,通过多维度去找到问题的答案。
今年 MIT 一共给申请者设计了六道 short answer essay questions ,每篇要求的篇幅都不长,基本都在 250 字以内,有一篇甚至只有 100 字的字数限制。
更少的字数限制,并不意味着写作难度的降低,申请者应具备更好的结构组织能力与语言能力。让我们一起看看今年 MIT 的文书问题吧:
MIT的5个小问题,主要围绕着申请者的成长轨迹、过往经历、处理问题的方式展开,是这样的:
1)描述一下你的生长环境,可以是你的家庭、俱乐部、学校、社区、城市或城镇。这样的环境如何塑造你的梦想与抱负呢?(不超过250字)
2)和我们谈谈 MIT 哪个领域对你最有吸引力?(不超过100字)
3)描述一次你真正因为喜欢而去参加的活动。(200-250字)
4)描述你为社会做出贡献的一种方式,无论是在家庭、同学间或邻里间,等等。(200-250字)
5)告诉我们你曾经历过的最严峻的挑战或是不按计划进行的事项。你是如何处理这样的情况呢?(200-250字)
需要特别注意的是,第六道题出现的位置不是太显眼,不注意审视文书要求的同学可能会漏掉噢,要求如下:
这是道开放性试题,让你描述除去上述 5 道题涉及的方面,还有什么关于你的信息是值得分享给学校的。
3、来自招生团队的文书
除了题目外,我们通常能看到招生官给出写文书的建议。阅读学校官方给的范文,是动笔前需要做的重要事项之一,这不仅能了解招生官的偏好,或许也能赋予你一些灵感。
基本上所有的学校都会提供往年申请者写的优秀范文,而 MIT 的招生官想到了一个更有趣的点子:我们亲自写。招生官亲自下场“秀肌肉”,是少见的。带着这样的好奇心,我阅读完了十二名招生官的“自我介绍”,决定破例给他们 offer(开个玩笑)。
招生团队选择了第三道题来做示范,也就是这道:
那么就让我们转换一下身份,化身“招生官”,看看“学生”们写的文书吧:Every summer I receive a visit from a person I' ve never met, a person who technically doesn' t exist. Let me explain. When I tookAPLiterature (many moons ago) I encountered Americanah by Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie for the first time. I fell in love with Adichie' s detailed, perceptive prose, her humor, and most of all, Ifemelu—the confident, witty, blog-writing main character. The story follows Ifemelu as she grows up in Lagos, Nigeria and immigrates to the United States for university, eventually becoming a successful writer and moving back to Nigeria to rediscover home. It' s a coming-of-age tale, a love story, and a record of how we all evolve based on social context and age. I reread this book every June, and each time, something new resonates with me—the nerve-wracking freedom of moving to a new city, the overwhelming rush of first love, the difficulty of reconciling one' s childhood self with an emerging adult self. Rereading the book has become a means to measure how I' ve grown as a person—similar to how I marked my height in pencil on my doorframe each year as a kid. By now Ifemelu feels like a friend, and the week I spend with her each summer feels like a highly-anticipated visit during which I remember all the reasons I connected to her in the first place and discover new axes of connection (and new parts of myself). Back to reading now—Ifemelu' s only here for a few more days.——AlessandraI slowly make my way through the metal doors, moving slowly, as to not draw too much attention. Taking a deep breath, I remind myself of my goal—one that will involve patience and determination. With each step, I make my way toward the future and the past:Stonewashed denim, with frayed hems that catch in the breezeA sequined gown straight out of Studio 54… that would also make a splash in Dua Lipa' s latest music videoMilitary inspired jackets with gleaming epauletsBattered concert tees of my favorite 80s bandsSuddenly, without any warning, my attention is drawn elsewhere—Italian loafers, chunky bangles, vibrant leather bags, with just a hint of irregular stitching. Then, out of nowhere, I spot her: hiding in an overstocked rolling rack, between a faux pas and my future self—the perfect dress. 50% off. In the cart she goes. Bargain shopping is not for the faint of heart, but for those willing to take the risk… the possibilities are endless.——Tiffany这里由于篇幅的关系,我就不放所有的范文了。从上面两篇范文中,我们可以看出MIT招生官很看重的一个点就是:展现最真实的自己。
MIT前招生办公室联络主任 Ben Jones 也曾说过 " we are looking for the applicant's true voice when we read his or her essay. "现任MIT招生办主任 Stuart Schmill 在此前接受的采访中也多次强调“我们想要看到最真实的你。”
真实!真实!真实!这也许就是MIT身为理科院校所看重的吧。长期面对冰冷的数字、符号、定律,热忱且真实的情感表达,会给招生官焕然一新的别样情绪。而真实表达的前提,就需要你的深思熟虑,构思是需要技巧与时间的,毕竟你想要展现给招生官的你的各个方面,和他们看完你的文书能感知到的信息,可能是有区别的。因此,如何将你想要展现的表现出来,是需要锻炼的。