在烤鸭们之间,一直流传着“万年5.5”这个说法。大家都苦恼于自己为什么背了那么多单词和范文,作文还是5.5呢?
对于雅思写作5.5分的学生,想要提升到6.5分或更高,关键在于提高写作的准确性、连贯性、丰富性和语言表达能力。
本期分享四种提高雅思写作能力的方法给大家,希望烤鸭们都顺利出分!
1. 加强任务回应(Task Response)
很多考生得分较低的原因是没有全面回答题目的要求。解决这个问题的方法其实也很简单,要认真审题,抓住题干中的限定性词汇和逻辑关系。像下面这个题目,学生们在审题时就要关注public museums and art galleries中的小小and。很多学生在展开讨论时,一直在拿museums细化举例子,而忽略了art galleries,这就会影响TR这项分数。
例题:
Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not beneeded because people can see historical objects and works of art by using acomputer.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
2. 改进结构和连贯性(Coherence and Cohesion)
每个段落应围绕一个明确的主题展开,且段落之间要有清晰的逻辑衔接。学生们可以参考下面这个段落。
例题:
Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe that individual actions can help improve the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
主体段1
On the one hand, the magnitude of environmental problems often makes individual contributions appear trivial. Infact, large-scale phenomena like global warming are driven by industrial emissions, deforestation for commercial purposes, and governmental policies. For instance, a single individual reducing plastic usage may seem negligible when compared to corporations producing tons of plastic waste daily. Consequently, many feel that only systemic changes led by governments and multinational corporations can effectively combat these issues.
评价:
The essay is exceptionally well-organized and easy to follow. The ideas flow logically, and the transitions between paragraphs are smooth and effective. The structure is clear and enhances the overall coherence.
3. 提高语法准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
为了在这一项得到高分,考生们要从两个方向提升文章质量,一个是避免常见错误:检查时注意一些常见语法错误,比如主谓一致、冠词、单复数、时态等。大家可以通过反复写作和纠错来减少这些错误。另外,学生们还要尽量使用不同的句型结构,避免单一的简单句或从句。例如,可以尝试使用非谓语动词等。
例子:
Our government invests a large sum of money into public transportation, so that buses or subways can attract more passengers.
改用非谓语如下:
Our government invests a large sum of money into public transportation, resulting in increasing use of buses or subways among commuters.
4. 丰富词汇(Lexical Resource)
避免重复使用词汇:尽量使用不同的表达方式,例如,不仅仅使用“good” and "bad"这些常见词汇,可以用"beneficial"、"advantageous"来替代"good";用"disastrous"、"devastating"来替代"bad"。
同时,学生们对于常见话题(如教育、健康、环境等),准备一些具体的高级词汇和表达方式。这会帮助你在写作中展示出更高的语言水平。