雅思大作文范文-禁止危险运动

2022年8月27日

Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

题干信息的同义替换：

1) dangerous sports

→hazardoussports

→dangerousphysical activities

2) ban

→prohibit

→stop people from (doing sth.)

视频讲解：

文本额外补充了做危险运动的好处：

1) pursuit of glory or honor追求光荣和荣耀

2) development of courage

提升勇气

3) an outlet for risk-taking impulses

发泄冒险的冲动

4) much better than safe sports at revealing us to an important fact that we are mortal and this might lead to living more fully and meaningfully

比安全的运动更能揭露我们并不永生的事实，让我们更充实更有意义地生活

5) a therapy that cures people of trauma, especially those who have trouble getting back to a normal life after losing their loved ones.

治愈有创伤的人，尤其是失去亲人，难以回到正常生活的人

补充的1) - 4)来自下边的论文：https://www.researchgate.net/publication/273773412_Justification_of_Dangerous_Sports_and_the_Question_of_Values

下边参考范文中，第二段举例骑牛和拳击，是背素材直接用的。

更多危险运动和损伤，见：危险运动和损伤英文素材开头段：引入话题（适用于双边讨论题型）+给出观点

There is a heated debate over whetherhazardoussports should be prohibited.

In my judgement, it is unwiseto stop people from taking up these sports.

主体段1：讨论题干观点1（让步+反驳）

Prohibition may seemwise becauseconsequences of doing these dangerous activities can be severe. For example, neck and head injuries, along with bonefractures, are common in bull-riding; boxers are prone to developing neural problems later in their life, like Parkinson’s disease. However, they are significantlyless likely to happen to the fittest players than who are physically poorly prepared. So itmay be advisableto exclude only those without tough bodies.Besides, such sports come with considerable economic benefits, as participants need spend a large sum buying equipment and hiringa coach andtheir sportvideos posted onlinemight be a source of income.

主体段2：讨论题干观点2

I am for those who believe thatindividuals should be free to take up dangerous sportsfortwomain reasons. Most importantly, some are born with the gene to experience thrills. They have no fear for high speed orheight, and even enjoy being in situations that others consider risky. I think they deserve to fulfill their desire to explore their lives in spite ofthe risks.In addition, these activities are much better than safe sports at revealing humans to an important fact that they are mortal and this might lead to living more fully and meaningfully.

结尾段：重申观点

To conclude, despite diseases, disabilities and deaths resulting from playing hazardous sports,the economic and psychologicalbenefits justify support for these activities, as long as the prospective athletes pass a physical fitness test related to a specific sport.

黑体部分都是模板，其他部分则是填入模板的答题内容。蓝色下划线部分是衔接。