咱们来看看4月30日的雅思大作文回顾&分析:
4月30日雅思大作文题
In many countries, people spend more and more time away from their families. What causes this trend? What effects do you think it has on themselves and their families?
题目解析:这道题和2019年12月21日的题目几乎完全一致:2019.12.21 Many people spend less and less time in their homes. What do you think are the reasons? What effects does it have on individuals and the society?两道题的区别是19年问社会的整体影响, 而22年题目问的是对家庭的影响
主体段1:好处
原因1:人口增加导致需求增加,导致产品价格增加,人们需要加班才能负担得起生活成本增加,于是陪家人的时间变少了
原因2:没有家人陪,自己一个人孤独习惯了,等到家人在旁边,也不愿意和家人沟通了
原因3:交通四通八达,人们选择离开家异地生活
主体段2:缺点
个人的影响:个人成就变高或个人生活更加多彩
家庭的影响:家庭关系变得疏远
从这道题大家可以看出刷真题的必要性以及认真学习真题写作范文的必要性,虽然不会在短时间内重复考相同的题目,但是思路、角度、范围却有可能重合,因此大家一定要认真思考、消化S大神给出的原因和文章结构,努力化用为自己的能力。当然,有了结构我们还需要学习一系列的相关高分词组短语来充实文章内容!
4月30日高分词组短语
Population explosion 人口爆炸
Population growth 人口增长
Aggregate economic demand经济总需求
Aggregate supply 总供给
Rising living costs 增加的生活成本
Deprive sb of sth 剥夺某人某事
Become accustomed to sth变得习惯某事
High-speed railway 高铁
Jet plane 飞机
Shorten geographical distance缩短距离
Earn a bigger paycheck 赚得更多
Enjoy material escalation物质生活更好
Improve mutual understanding增加互信
Build trust 建立信任
Enhance familiarity 提升熟悉程度
Grow affinity 变得亲近
高分短语肯定要与高分语法和句式配合使用,精华短语配合精准句式,雅思考官看了都不得不竖个大拇指,大作文高分妥妥的~
4月30日高分语法及长句
1.Now, for two main reasons, their family time is shrinking, and their family relations worsening. 省略
2.This is the first step on a slippery slope where people would prefer their spare time not to be disturbed by their loved ones 限定性定语从句
3.High-speed railways and jet planes have shortened geographical distance, vastly increasing population mobility. 结果状语
4.The positive influence that this trend exerts on individuals is that they might have greater personal achievements or more colorful personal life, depending on how they spend their time 伴随状语
只要吃透S大神的这篇作文精华分享,还愁雅思作文分数没法提高嘛!
碍于篇幅原因今天的雅思大作文就先解析到这里啦~