4月已经快要过半了,每次给大家分享大作文的时候都在感概时间过得太快啦!
要考试的同学一定要抓紧时间学习哦~也不要忘记认真研习我们分享的满分范文,过来人验证,真的很有用!
在雅思领域深耕近10年、累积雅思教学时长5万+小时、雅思机经作者、中国雅思考题回忆第一人——S大神继续给大家带来了独家雅思福利——大作文解析!
咱们来看看4月8日的雅思大作文回顾&分析:
4月8日雅思大作文题
In the past, people ate local food in season. Nowadays, people buy a variety of food from all over the world. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
题目解析:
这是一篇全球化主题的文章 。
主体段1:这种趋势的不好
不好1:进口食品不新鲜, 但冷链技术可以解决
不好2:进口食品携带病毒, 但海关人员可以筛除
主体段2:这种趋势能提高人们的福祉
好处1:身体更健康
好处2:有更高的自治权(食物选择自由)
进口食品也算很贴近大家的生活了,这种看似日常的题目其实更加考验我们的思考和探究能力,我们要从平时生活中看到更深入更广阔的问题。有深度的观点加上逻辑清晰的结构,到这里你的雅思大作文已经成功一半了!
接下来我们继续看看S大神给我们分享的高分短语和词组,让我们的作文结构充盈起来!
4月8日高分词组短语
domestically produced food本地食物
imported food 进口食物
chief concern 主要担心
long-distance transport 长途运输
cold-chain technology 冷链技术
vehicle of viruses 携带病毒(病毒载体)
custom officers 海关
farming conditions 耕种条件
seasonality 季节性
怎么样,有多少词组大家很熟悉,有多少大家还不太认识的?温故而知新,无论熟悉与否大家都可以多多积累。
说到积累,大家可不能随意看两眼就觉得自己已经掌握了这些词组哦,建议同学们“好记性不如烂笔头”,每次看我们的大作文分享的时候,大家最好能把对大家有用的知识点记录下来并不时地复习,这样才是最大化利用资源!
而且同学们积累词组的时候可以结合S大神给我们总结的高分长难句,一起记忆,事半功倍!
4月8日高分长句与语法
1.Long-distance transport inevitably extends the exposure of food products to the outside environment, thus making them prone to perishing or being spoiled. 结果状语
2.But the rapidly developing cold-chain technology widely used in food transport now can make imported food as fresh as local food when it is presented on people’s dining table. 分词作定语, 时间状语
3.In special times, such as the covid-19 pandemic, imported food becomes the vehicle of viruses, which risks jeopardizing the health of a country’s population. 非限定定语从句
4.First, people would become healthier by consuming a wide range of foreign food than they would have if their options are limited to local food. 比较状语
5.Unlike locally cultivated food, which only provides a certain spectrum of nutrients because of local farming conditions, imported food offers domestic shoppers a great diversity of vitamins and micronutrients as they are grown in different parts of the world. 比较状语, 原因状语
只要吃透S大神的这篇作文精华分享,还愁雅思作文分数没法提高嘛!碍于篇幅原因今天的雅思大作文就先解析到这里啦!