今天，给大家带来一个G类雅思写作范文。
题目：
In addition to your full-time job, you are taking a 15-hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter:
- Describe your schedule and situation
- Explain why you cannot continue the course
- Say what action you would like to take
审题：
- Type: Semi-formal
- Key words: Describe the schedule and situation/explain why/next action would like
- Model Answer 高分范文-
Dear Mr. Reynolds,
I’m afraid I have some unfortunate news.Due to beingover-extended at work,I find myself unable to meet the time demands ofthe course.
On Mondays in particular, asthe distance of the schoolis some way frommy place of work,and as I hadover-estimated my capacity for navigating rush hour, Monday has proven to be ahindrancein my studyeffectiveness, and asmy late arrival last Mondayshows,anobstacleto arrivingtimelyto class.
I know this is highlyunorthodox, but I would like to inquire as tothe possibility ofonly attending Wednesday’s class. Friday isalsoposing a problemfor attending the class as mysuperiorhasshiftedanothertaskmy wayin the interim. For homework,perhaps I couldcheck in with one of the studentsregardingthe areascovered in classand the homeworkassigned.
As I said, I know this is a highly unusual request, and my apologies for having to ask you.If you consider thisunworkable,I fully understand,and in that case,I’m afraid I mustdiscontinuethe courseat present. You are asplendidteacherno doubt!
Thank you,
Stuart Goddard
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
Standard Phrases G类雅思高分句型:
- Dear _____,
- I’m afraid I have some unfortunate news.
- I find myself unable to meet the time demands of…
- my place of work
- I know this highly unorthodox, but I would like to inquire as to the possibility of
- As I said, I know this is a highly unusual request, and my apologies for having to ask you.
- , I fully understand,
- Thank you,
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
- is some way from 离……有点远
- over-estimated 高估了
- my capacity for 能力
- rush hour 高峰期
- hindrance 阻碍
- effectiveness 效率
- obstacle 障碍
- unorthodox 非传统的；不正规的
- the possibility of ……的可能性
- posing a problem 造成了一个问题
- superior 上司
- shifted____ my way 到我头上
- in the interim 在这期间
- covered in class 课上涉及到的
- assigned 布置
- unworkable 行不通的
- discontinue 中断
- splendid 出色的
- no doubt 毫无疑问
Coherence & Cohesion (C&C):把这些简单的词用好，在"连贯与衔接"方面轻松拿分：
- Due to being
- , I
- On +day+ in particular,
- , as
- , and as I had
- has proven to be
- , and as
- shows
- , an
- timely
- only
- also
- another
- , perhaps I could
- regarding
- As I said,
- If you consider this
- , and in that case,
- at present
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