今天，给大家带来一个IELTS雅思城镇规划类小作文的原创范文。
题目：
The diagram shows the proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.
- Model Answer 高分范文 -
The diagram shows a proposal,withbefore and after drawings,forimproving Foster Road between SE 84th Street and 85th Avenue.
Overall,the planincludesaspects of beautification, such astree planting, along withcreating a more pedestrian-friendly environment.
A total of fourteen treeswill beplanted on the two sides of the road, with six onone sideand eighton the otherand will beplantedatequal intervalsalong the sidewalks.In order toaccommodatethesetrees, the sidewalks will be widened to almosttwice their existing width. The proposalalsoincludes bicycle pathsrunning alongsideeach sidewalk.Withtheinclusion ofthesetwo changes, the roaditselfwillbe reduced fromtwo lanes each way to one lane each way, but withthe addition of a middleaccess lanefor turning, whichwill beterminated bythe addition ofa traffic island.Immediately afterthe traffic island, azebra-crossingwill be created.
The structures along the road,as well astheelectrical poles, will remainas theyare presently.
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
Standard Task 1 Phrases雅思小作文地道表达积累：
- The diagram shows a proposal…for 该图展示了一个针对……的提议
- Overall, 总体来说
- the plan includes 规划包括
- will be
- as they are presently
Vocabulary高分地道词汇:
- drawings 图样；图纸
- aspects of 方面
- beautification 美化
- tree planting 植树
- pedestrian-friendly 方便行人的
- on one side...on the other 在一侧……在另一侧
- planted 种植
- equal intervals 相等间隔
- accommodate 安置
- widened 加宽
- twice their existing width 是现有宽度的两倍
- running alongside 沿着……走
- inclusion of 包含
- be reduced from (passive voice) 被减少
- access lane 通道
- terminated by 被……终止
- a traffic island 行人安全岛；交通岛
- a zebra-crossing 斑马线
- electrical poles 电线杆
Cohesion (C&C words and phrases)把这些简单的词用好，在"连贯与衔接"方面轻松拿分：
- with
- includes
- , such as
- along with
- and will be
- In order to
- these
- also
- With
- these
- itself
- but with
- will be
- Immediately after
- as well as
- as they
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