剑11写作7分范文及解析：Test4 经济发展最重要

双边类大作文，社会类话题

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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1、题目大意

许多政府认为经济进步是他们最重要的目标，然而有些人认为其他类型的进步对一个国家同样重要。讨论双方观点并给出你的看法。

2、思路解析

这是一道双边类大作文，讨论的是国家的目标应该是什么。双边类大作文，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，最终的结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。审题时注意两点，一是观点中绝对词“most important goal”，一般遇到绝对化观点从反对角度切入会更加合适。二是题目双方观点存在比较关系，因此在文章中需要论证“经济”和“其他”哪个更重要或同等重要。下面，月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看将经济进步作为国家目标的原因，有两方面。

一是经济发展意味着社会上有更多的就业机会，人们能赚取收入并有机会过上更好的生活。反之，高失业率可能会带来许多社会不安定因素，比如犯罪。

二是经济发展意味着政府有更多税收以及财政资金，而有了丰厚的资金才能投入更多领域建设来进一步提高人们生活品质的，比如基础设施、公共交通、医疗、教育等。

但是除了经济发展，其他领域的发展对于国家同样重要，因为经济发展并不能解决所有问题。（这里可以讲的点有很多，可以挑选2-3个）

完善的法律条例和公正执法，能够切实保障人们的生命和财产安全，提高人们安全感。

教育普及能够提升人们的认知水平、文化程度和道德感，不仅有助于个人成长，促进阶层流动，也能营造更加良好的社会风气。

健全的社会保障制度，既能减轻普通人的生活压力，也能够帮助贫困群体维持生计。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

While economic achievements have become the sole pursuit of many governments nowadays, there are still some people who stick to the traditional view that a comprehensive development of a country should not be limited to economy. To me, I am with the view that there are many areas need to be improved by governments.

For those with blind worship of economic development, the material advance is lauded as a feather in their caps. It is undeniable that the prosperity does bring many advantages. The primary dividend is the stable employment that comes with it, which is also the most practical benefit to the youth. On the contrary, suppose that in a society with high unemployment rate, the juvenile delinquency caused by poverty would have been far beyond the government’s control. Also, another blessing brought by the development lays emphasis on infrastructure, as the prosperity allows for investment in sectors as traffic and housing, which in turn, will reward every citizen in the country.

However, such economic determinism has already provoked the discontent of critics, when quite a few appeal for more concerns from the authority on other areas of public service. The first sector deserving more consideration is education, especially in the contemporary world prevailed with money worship whereas traditional values as trust and honor are fading. Under such circumstance, the government’s investment in education is particularly crucial in cultivating moral value for the young generations. Another field we should not forget is social welfare. Once shifting our eyes from glamorous cities to the impoverished villages, we could see millions of people leading miserable lives behind superficial prosperity. To them, concrete financial aid grabbed in their hands is more practical than grandiloquent economic index in news.

In conclusion, though the value of economy cannot be absolutely denied, I am profoundly convinced that economic advancement is too narrow an area for governments to concentrate on.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Pursuit   追求 ; 寻找

Worship   崇拜，敬仰

Feather in their caps   引以为豪的成就

Prosperity   兴旺 ; 繁荣

Dividend   股息 ; 分红

Unemployment rate   失业率

Far beyond the government’s control   远超政府的控制

Infrastructure   基础设施

Economic determinism   经济决定论

Provoke   激起 ; 引起 ; 引发

Deserve   值得 ; 应得

Prevail   流行 ; 盛行 ; 战胜

Moral value   道德价值观

Glamorous   迷人的

Impoverished   穷困潦倒 ;贫穷;

Miserable   痛苦的，苦恼的

Superficial   粗略的 ; 肤浅的

Concrete   混凝土 ; 混凝土制的 ; 确实的，具体的

Grandiloquent   言辞浮夸的

Economic index    经济指标