10.22大陆雅思大作文7分范文及解析：噪音的原因和解决办法

报告类大作文，环境类话题

The level of noise around us is constantly increasing, and is affecting the quality of our lives. What cause the noise? What should be done about it?

题目来源：2022年10月22日大陆雅思大作文

1、题目大意

我们周围的噪音水平不断增加，并且影响我们的生活质量。是什么导致了噪音？应该如何处理？

2、思路解析

这是一道报告类大作文，聊得是噪音污染的原因和解决办法，题目非常基础，报告类文章结构也相对简单，两个主体段分别对应两个问题，主体段一分析原因，主体段二提出解决办法。情报圈3个月前也发过一篇噪音相关的范文，有兴趣的同学可以在历史推文记录中查看。下面，我们来看这道题目具体观点。

首先来看原因，有三方面

一是工业噪音上升，人口扩张导致人们的需求进一步增加，更多工厂在生产的过程中会不断产生的噪音，同时越来越多的工程建设，同样会带来巨大的噪音影响附近居民。

二是交通工具噪音增加，在过去几十年中，人们拥有的汽车、飞机等交通工具数量上升，这些交通工具的发动机声音或鸣笛等都会成为噪音的一部分。

三是个人的不良行为同样会产生噪音，比如手机在如今生活中已经非常普及，但伴随而来的是人们在公共场合大声打电话或者外放音乐和视频，都会成为噪音一部分，这在几十年前是不存在的。

然后来看解决办法，主要是三方面。

一是通过新技术能够降低机器生产过程中或交通工具运行过程中产生的噪音，同时使用诸如隔音挡板等设备，减少现有的噪音对于周围居民的影响。

二是政府可以出台法令法规，要求工厂、机场等容易产生噪音的设施必须远离居民区，以及规定汽车对于鸣笛的使用，以减少噪音污染。

三是通过宣传，提高人们的公共意识，避免在公共场合发出个人噪音。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

The unpleasant sound that disrupts the lives of humans and animals is referred to as "Noise Pollution" As a result of a rise in external noise levels, individuals' lifestyles are becoming highly imbalanced. This essay will examine why these problems exist and what can be done to resolve them.

Initially, industrial activity was one of the primary causes. To elaborate, the rate of population expansion is proportional to the increase in product manufacturing, which is the fundamental cause of the meteoric rise in industrial noise levels. In addition, the growing number of automobiles on the road causes a tremendous amount of noise. This is due to growing car traffic, which has become a significant environmental and human problem. In addition, the noise generated by massive loudspeakers at occasions such as parties and weddings interrupts the lives of individuals. Recent research in Asian countries, for example, revealed that human activities account for an astounding 80% of noise.Thus, factory operations and automobile traffic are the reasons for the elevated noise proportion.

Despite the fact that there are multiple explanations for the rising discontent, I believe that this problem can be minimised by the government if smart measures are taken. First, the government's stringent enforcement of laws forbidding the production of sound above the permissible limits against lawbreakers. Second, firms should install soundproof barriers to lower noise levels, and industry should be restricted to isolated places far from residential areas. In order to lower noise levels, trees should be planted in a straight line in locations with considerable traffic. When such limitations were strictly applied in Africa, decibel levels plummeted. The government may therefore play a major role in tackling the issue of rising noise levels.

This essay concludes by discussing how the growth in industrial activity and traffic noise are the key causes of the rise in noise pollution. Furthermore, it was suggested that imposing strict regulations and installing noise barriers could mitigate the severity of the problem.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

unpleasant   不愉快的

disrupts   扰乱

increase in   在……方面增长

account for   导致、对……负有责任

soundproof   隔音的

decibel   分贝

plummet   暴跌、快速降低