雅思大作文7分范文及解析：商品便宜的利弊

利弊类大作文，社会类话题

Nowadays people live in the society where consumer goods are relatively cheaper to buy. Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

题目来源：2015年3月19日亚太雅思大作文

1、题目大意

当今人们生活在一个商品相对便宜的世界。你认为优点是否大于缺点？

2、思路解析

这是一道利弊类大作文，讨论的是商品便宜的利弊。利弊类文章需要强调在论证上体现合理性，即在具体的分析中，明确能体现出一边的论述的确是大于另一边，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有说服力并不取决于观点的数量，而是内容是否有说服力。审题时注意限定观点“consumer goods are relatively cheaper”，在论证中，一定要围绕“相对便宜的商品”来展开。下面，月半鸭和大家一起来看具体观点。

首先来看好处，有两方面。

一是商品相对便宜，使得更多人有机会购买并享受到其所带来的便利生活。比如空调和冰箱价格降低，使得很多普通家庭都有机会拥有，进而享受到这些家电所带来的便利生活，整体社会幸福度也能进一步提高。

二是商品经济能得到进一步的发展。商品相对便宜使得购买量上升，更多客户需求有可能被激发。商家在扩张市场增加销售额同时，也会进一步扩大生产，创造出更多的就业岗位。

然后来看坏处。

首先商品价格低，企业为了节约成本可能偷工减料甚至采用非法的原材料，最终侵犯消费者的权益。其次购买成本过低使得人们不再珍惜，导致铺张浪费，巨量的商品被制造出来不仅可能消耗太多原材料，还会产生许多垃圾，这些对于环境保护都是不利的。

但是，这些坏处都是能得到改善的（利大于弊的观点），前者可以由政府制定条例规范生产，并对违法者实施处罚，以保障消费者。后者可以采用更多环保材料制造商品，同时鼓励人们适量使用和重复利用商品，提高人们的环保意识。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

In recent decades, as the globe has undergone various changes, it has become increasingly typical for the commodity to be notably less expensive than it once was. I agree with the claim made by some that this tendency has generated more benefits than drawbacks.

The first advantage is that it enables clients to enjoy a more productive work environment and purchase previously unaffordable products, such as laptops. In the past, computers were too costly for the average person, but as prices have decreased, it is now accessible for individuals to acquire computers, which has entirely changed the way people live. Aside from the improvement in living standards, another advantage of this phenomenon is that it will encourage the sale of goods, indicating that corporations will control the market or grow their market share by lowering prices, for instance through penetration pricing. When corporations establish prices for new items that are not excessively costly in order to attract a large number of customers and increase their market share, they are engaging in penetration pricing. This accelerates the business's reputation-building initiatives.

Many say that the disadvantage of low pricing for consumer goods is that corporations cut prices aggressively in order to undercut the competitive order. In other words, as a result of price reductions, many organisations are forced to steal information materials and produce physical things in order to generate a profit, which is detrimental to customers. Nevertheless, the laws of a number of nations prescribe severe penalties for unfair competition. Furthermore, producers who cut corners, such as the Chinese company Sanlu milk powder, are severely penalised.

In conclusion, even though there may be some negative aspects to decreasing prices, I still believe that this is a generally positive development, especially when the standard of living rises and the variety of items expands.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Phenomenon 现象

Prompt 促进

Unfair competition 不公平竞争

penetration pricing 渗透定价

Reputation 名誉，知名度

Vicious 激烈的

Ultimately 最终