雅思大作文7分范文及解析：公共场合能否用手机

双边类大作文，科技类话题

Some people say that mobile phones should not be used in public places such as buses, trains, restaurants, and cinemas. Others say that people should be able to use mobile phones anywhere. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

题目来源：2015年10月4日大陆雅思大作文

1、题目大意

有些人认为移动电话不应该在公共场所使用，比如公共汽车、火车、餐馆和电影院。其他人认为人们可以在任何地方使用手机。讨论双方观点并给出你自己的意见。

2、思路解析

这是一道双边类大作文，聊的是公共场所使用移动电话的问题。双边类的题目，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，最终的结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。审题时候注意两点，一是限定对象“mobile phones”和“public places”，观点一定要在这两个范围中进行讨论。二是绝对词，“should not”和“anywhere”都是绝对化表达，因此两边观点都可以从反对角度切入会更好写。下面月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看不应在公共场合随意使用手机的原因，主要有两方面。

一是公共场合使用手机的噪音会打扰到其他人，无论是播放音乐还是打电话，声音太大都会对身边人造成困扰，过量的噪音甚至会让人感到烦躁。

二是在一些公共场合比如电影院，手机发出的光亮也会干扰到其他人，让他们有不好的消费体验。而为了保障其他消费者的权利，商家也会反对个人在其中使用手机。

然后来看不应完全禁止的原因，同样有两方面。

一方面手机作为人们常用的娱乐手段，在乘坐公共交通时能够用来打发时间，同时使用耳机或者调成静音能够有效避免发出噪音打扰到其他乘客。在不影响他人的情况下，限制人们使用手机并没有意义。

另一方面手机作为现在人们重要的沟通手段，如果遇到紧急的事情，即使在公共场合，当事人也需要联系他人或者能被联系上，因此应该保障人们必要时能够使用手机的基本权利。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

People today are cell phone addicts and use them cosntantly. While there are those who believe that using mobile phones in public should be forbidden, there are others who do not share this opinion. I personally think people should be encouraged to avoid using their mobile devices in public, but a strict ban may be upsetting.

Due to the fact that certain phone-related behaviours might be annoying, it may be desirable to limit their usage in public settings so as to establish an atmosphere that is pleasant and conducive to everyone feel at ease. A traveller who interrupts the experience of other passengers on a crowded train by shouting into their phone, playing music or TikTok videos, and speaking loudly is considered a noise generator. In places where peace and quiet are necessary for concentration, such as a movie theatre or a library, the noise from mobile phones can be exceedingly distracting. In addition, the light from people's phones disturbs the people inside the theatre, which is an offence on the rights of those who are paying to watch movies and not for a miserable experience.

The use of mobile phones in public settings is unpleasant and offensive, yet it should not be restricted totally because it is an inconvenience to others. Texting, swiping on social media, and listening to music through earbuds make no audible sound and should, therefore, not be restricted on public transportation or in libraries. These activities assist people in passing the time and hence should not be restricted. Second, a complete ban on cell phone use would make it harder to communicate during times of emergency and should be avoided for this reason. Because calling is still the most direct and effective method of communication, it is vital that individuals have access to their phones during emergencies.

In conclusion, it is considered impolite to use a mobile phone in public and should be avoided. However, It is inconvenient and unnecessary to impose such stringent restrictions on the usage of mobile devices.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Be obsessed with 沉迷于

Discourage sb from doing sth 劝阻做

Veritable 名副其实的

Infringement of rights 侵犯权益

Swipe the phone 滑动手机