雅思大作文7分范文及解析：机器人对人类的影响

双边类大作文，科技类话题

Some people think that robots are very important for humans' future development. Others, however, think that robots are dangerous inventions that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

题目来源：2011年1月8日大陆雅思大作文

1、题目大意

有些人认为机器人对人类的未来发展非常重要。但也有人认为机器人是危险的发明，可能对社会产生负面影响。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点

2、思路解析

这是一道双边类的题目，讨论的是机器人的好处和坏处。双边类的题目，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，最终的结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。审题时注意需要注意，无论哪一方都需要围绕机器人对人类社会的影响展开。下面，月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看机器人对人类未来发展的好处。

机器人的发展确实给人类未来带来许多可能。机器人可以代替人类去完成许多目前依靠人力无法完成的任务，比如深海探索或宇宙探索。以目前人们的科技，很难让人类个体能够长时间在月球上特别是背面进行活动，但交给机器人却有可能完成，进而为人类的科学研究带来宝贵的资源。

然后来看机器人对社会的负面影响。

一方面，越来越多的机器人替代人力进行工作，造成许多人正在失去或者未来会失去工作机会，由此诞生的失业问题如果不妥善解决，可能会进一步导致社会动荡。

另一方面，随着人工智能不断发展，有更多人担心机器人拥有像人类一样思维且拥有更强的能力后，是否会脱离人们的控制，对人类造成危害。这种对于潜在危险的恐惧不无道理，且人们届时是否有能力应对这类问题同样是未知的。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

Since the term 'robot' was coined in the middle of the last century, the development of artificial intelligence has experienced dramatic changes. In recent years, with the advances in related technologies, it is believed that robots will exert enormous influence on human life, even threatening human survival.

On the one hand, the proponents of robot contribution believe that intelligent machines are indispensable components to space exploration which will usher human beings to the future development. For example, landing on the moon was the milestone which extended antenna of human beings into outer space for the first time, which was completed by a variety of machines. Furthermore, the breakthrough in scientific technology will make it possible that human beings will eventually colonize Mars.

On the other hand, robots are stealing some jobs from human workers. Nowadays, the production lines in modern factories have been almost occupied by mechanical arms. Companies have introduced a large number of automatic machines to replace labor workers so as to reduce costs. Other kinds of workers, such as accountants and cashiers will lose their jobs in the future. Human beings are facing unprecedented challenges and crises. Given the speed of evolution, robots will think as human beings and become smarter and stronger. If thoughts and behaviors of robots are out of control, the doomsday will come and human beings are not able to counter this trend.

My view is that it is important for human beings to prepare themselves for future challenges. The development of robots has been far beyond the wildest imagination of human beings. Therefore, how to rein in this situation is one of the crucial tasks for us.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Doomsday  世界末日

Counter  反抗

Production line  生产线

Unprecedented  前所未有的

Accountant  会计

Cashier  收银员

coin  创造